英語作文具體怎么寫，請求高手幫忙， 大學(xué)英語作文請高手幫忙啊
英語作文的基本要求：
首先，一個段落必須有一個中心即主題思想，該中心由主題句特別是其中的題旨來表達(dá)。整個段落必須緊扣這個主題（stick or hold to the topic），這就是段落的統(tǒng)一性（unity）。其次，一個段落必須有若干推展句，使主題思想得到充分展開，從而給讀者一個完整的感覺，這就是完整性（completeness or adequateness）。再者，一個段落不是雜亂無章的，而是有機的組合，句子的排列順序必須合乎邏輯，從一個句子到另一個句子的過渡必須流暢（smooth），這就是連貫性（coherence）。下面我們就對這三個標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分別加以說明。
1、統(tǒng)一性
一個段落內(nèi)的各個句子必須從屬于一個中心，任何游離于中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。請看下例：
Joe and I decided to take the long trip we'd always wanted across the country. We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner. To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico.
本段的主題句是段首句，controlling idea（中心思想）是take the long trip across the country。文中出現(xiàn)兩個irrelevant sentences，一個是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie，這一段是講的是Joe and I ，中間出現(xiàn)一個Bella是不合適的。還有，Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner這一句更是與主題句不相關(guān)。再看一個例子：
My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again. I bought two new suitcases last week. Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was a premature baby.
本段的controlling idea 是like to deep physically fit，但段中有兩個irrelevant sentences，一個是I bought two new suitcases last week，另一個是My mother was a premature baby。
從上面兩個例子可以看出，native speakers同樣會造出來irrelevant sentences。卷面上如果這種句子多了，造成偏題或離題，那問題就更嚴(yán)重了。
2、完整性
正象我們前面說得那樣，一個段落的主題思想靠推展句來實現(xiàn)，如果只有主題句而沒有推展句來進(jìn)一步交待和充實，就不能構(gòu)成一個完整的段落。同樣，雖然有推展句，但主題思想沒有得到相對圓滿的交待，給讀者一種意猶未盡的感覺。這樣的段落也不能完成其交際功能。例如：
Physical work can be a useful form of therapy for a mind in turmoil. Work concentrates your thoughts on a concrete task. Besides, it is more useful to work —— you produce something rather than more anxiety or depression.
本段的主題句是段首句。本段的兩個推展句均不能回答主題句中提出的問題。什么是“a mind in turmoil”（心境不平靜）Physical work又如何能改變這種情況？為什么它能起therapy的作用？讀者得不到明確的答案。因此，要達(dá)到完整就必須盡可能地簡明。例如：
It is not always true that a good picture is worth a thousand words. Often writing is much clearer than a picture. It is sometimes difficult to figure out what a picture means, but a careful writer can almost always explain it.
段首句所表達(dá)的主題思想是一種看法，必須有具體事例加以驗證。上述兩個推展句只是在文字上對主題作些解釋，整個段落內(nèi)容空洞，簡而不明。如果用一兩個具體的例子的話，就可以把主題解釋清楚了。比如下段：
It is not always true that a picture is worth a thousand words. Sometimes, pictures are pretty useless things. If you can't swim and fall in the river and start gulping water, will you be better off to hold up a picture of yourself drowning, or start screaming "Help"?
3、連貫性（coherence）
連貫性包括意連和形連兩個方面，前者指的是內(nèi)在的邏輯性，后者指的是使用轉(zhuǎn)換詞語。當(dāng)然這兩者常常是不可分割的。只有形連而沒有意連，句子之間就沒有內(nèi)在的有機的聯(lián)系；反之，只有意連而沒有形連，有時行文就不夠流暢。
1）、意連
段落中句子的排列應(yīng)遵循一定的次序，不能想到什么就寫什么。如果在下筆之前沒有構(gòu)思，邊寫邊想，寫寫停停，那就寫不出一氣呵成的好文章來。下面介紹幾種常見的排列方式。
A．按時間先后排列（chronological arrangement）
We had a number of close calls that day. When we rose, it was obviously late and we had to hurry so as not to miss breakfast; we knew the dining room staff was strict about closing at nine o'clock. Then, when we had been driving in the desert for nearly two hours —— it must have been close to noon —— the heat nearly hid us in; the radiator boiled over and we had to use most of our drinking water to cool it down. By the time we reached the mountain, it was our o'clock and we were exhausted. Here, judgement ran out of us and we started the tough climb to the summit, not realizing that darkness came suddenly in the desert. Sure enough, by six we were struggling and Andrew very nearly went down a steep cliff, dragging Mohammed and me along with him. By nine, when the wind howled across the flat ledge of the summit, we knew as we shivered together for warmth that it had not been our lucky day.
本段從“rose”（起床）寫起，然后是吃早餐（“not to miss breakfast”, “closing at nine o'clock”），然后是“close to noon”，一直寫到這一天結(jié)束（“By nine——”）。
B. 按位置遠(yuǎn)近排列（spatial arrangement）。例如：
From a distance, it looked like a skinny tube, but as we got closer, we could see it flesh out before our eyes. It was tubular, all right, but fatter than we could see from far away. Furthermore, we were also astonished to notice that the building was really in two parts: a pagoda sitting on top of a tubular one-story structure. Standing ten feet away, we could marvel at how much of the pagoda was made up of glass windows. Almost everything under the wonderful Chinese roof was made of glass, unlike the tube that it was sitting on, which only had four. Inside, the tube was gloomy, because of the lack of light. Then a steep, narrow staircase took us up inside the pagoda and the light changed dramatically. All those windows let in a flood of sunshine and we could see out for miles across the flat land.
本段的寫法是由遠(yuǎn)及近，從遠(yuǎn)處（“from a distance”）寫起，然后“get closer”，再到（“ten feet away”），最后是“inside the pagoda”……當(dāng)然，按位置遠(yuǎn)近來寫不等于都是由遠(yuǎn)及近。根據(jù)需要，也可以由近及遠(yuǎn)，由表及里等等。
C. 按邏輯關(guān)系排列（logical arrangement）
a. 按重要性順序排列（arrangement in order of importance）
If you work as a soda jerker, you will, of course, not need much skill in expressing yourself to be effective. If you work on a machine, your ability to express yourself will be of little importance. But as soon as you move one step up from the bottom, your effectiveness depends on your ability to reach others through the spoken or the written word. And the further away your job is from manual work, the larger the organization of which you are an employee, the more important it will be that you know how to convey your thoughts in writing or speaking. In the very large business organization, whether it is the government, the large corporation, or the Army, this ability to express oneself is perhaps the most important of all the skills a man can possess.
這一段談的是表達(dá)能力，它的重要性與職業(yè)，身份有關(guān)，從“not need much skill”或“of little importance”到“more important”，最后是“most important”。
b.由一般到特殊排列（general-to-specific arrangement）
If a reader is lost, it is generally because the writer has not been careful enough to keep him on the path. This carelessness can take any number of forms. Perhaps a sentence is so excessively cluttered that the reader, hacking his way through the verbiage, simply doesn't know what it means. Perhaps a sentence has been so shoddily constructed that the reader could read it in any of several ways. Perhaps the writer has switched tenses, or has switched pronouns in mid-sentence, so the reader loses track of when the action took place or who is talking. Perhaps sentence B is not logical sequel to sentence A —— the writer, in whose head the connection is clear, has not bothered to provide the missing link. Perhaps the writer has used an important word incorrectly by not taking the trouble to look it up. He may think that "sanguine" and "sanguinary" mean the same thing, but the difference is a bloody big one. The reader can only infer what the writer is trying to imply.
這一段談的是a writer's carelessness，先給出一個general statement作為主題句，然后通過5個 ”perhaps”加以例證。
c. 由特殊到一般排列（specific-to-general arrangement）
I do not understand why people confuse my Siamese cat, Prissy, with the one I had several years ago, Henry. The two cats are only alike in breed. Prissy, a quiet, feminine feline, loves me dearly but not possessively. She likes to keep her distance from people, exert her independence and is never so rude as to beg, lick, or sniff unceremoniously. Her usual posture is sitting upright, eyes closed, perfectly still. Prissy is a very proper cat. Henry, on the other hand, loved me dearly but possessively. He was my shadow from morning till night. He expected me to constantly entertain him. Henry never cared who saw him do anything, whether it was decorous or not, and he usually offended my friends in some way. The cat made himself quite comfortable, on the top of the television, across stranger's feet or laps, in beds, drawers, sacks, closets, or nooks. The difference between them is imperceptible to strangers.
本段的主題句是段首句，它僅提出一個問題：為什么兩只貓會被搞混。然后對兩者進(jìn)行比較，末句才下結(jié)論。
2）、形連
行文的邏輯性常常要靠適當(dāng)?shù)霓D(zhuǎn)換詞語及其他手段來實現(xiàn)。請讀下面這一段文字并找出文中用以承上啟下的詞語：
Walter's goal in life was to become a successful surgeon. First, though, he had to get through high school, so he concentrated all his efforts on his studies —— in particular, biology, chemistry, and math. Because he worked constantly on these subjects, Walter became proficient in them; however, Walter forgot that he needed to master other subjects besides those he had chosen. As a result, during his junior year of high school, Walter failed both English and Latin. Consequently, he had to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graduate on schedule. Finally, on June 6, Walter achieved the first step toward realizing his goal.
本文中起承上啟下的詞語有兩種，一種是轉(zhuǎn)換詞語（transitional words or phrases），另一種是起轉(zhuǎn)換作用的其他連接手段（linking devices）。前者依次有：first, though, so, in particular, and, because, however, besides, as a result, both…and, consequently, and, finally.后者依次是：he, he, his, his, he, these, them, he, those, his, he, these, his. 本段中共有詞匯105個，所使用的轉(zhuǎn)換詞語及其他連接用語共26個詞，約占該段總詞匯量的四分之一。由此可見，掌握好transitions不僅對行文的流（smoothness）有益，而且對于學(xué)生在半個小時內(nèi)寫120個詞也是不無好處的。
一個段落里如果沒有transitions也就很難有coherence了.我們看下面一個例子：
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds. Writing uses written symbols. Speech developed about 500 000 years ago. Written language is a recent development. It was invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal. The word choice of writing is often relatively formal. Pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from. Pronunciation and accent are ignored in writing. A standard diction and spelling system prevails in the written language of most countries. Speech relies on gesture, loudness, and rise and fall of the voice. Writing lacks gesture, loudness and the rise and fall of the voice. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences.
本段中除了第6句開頭出現(xiàn)一個起過渡作用的”it”之外，沒有使用其他的過渡詞語.這樣，文中出現(xiàn)許多重復(fù)的詞語，全段讀起來也顯得生硬而不自然。如果加上必要的過渡詞語來修飾的話，這一段就成了下面一個流暢連貫的段落：
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds; writing, on the other hand, uses written symbols. Speech was developed about 500 000 years ago, but written language is a recent development, invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal, while the word choice of writing, by contrast, is often relatively formal. Although pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from, they are ignored in wiring because a standard diction and spelling system prevails in most countries. Speech relies on gesture, loudness, and the rise and fall of the voice, but writing lacks these features. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences．
4、有損連貫性的幾種情況：
考生在寫作中經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)下面幾種錯誤：
1、不必要的改變時態(tài)，比如：
In the movie, Robert Redford was a spy. He goes to his office where he found everybody dead. Other spies wanted to kill him, so he takes refuge with Julie Christie. At her house, he had waited for the heat to die down, but they come after him anyway.
2、不必要的改變單復(fù)數(shù)，比如：
Everybody looks for satisfaction in his life. They want to be happy. But if he seeks only pleasure in the short run, the person will soon run out of pleasure and life will catch up to him. They need to pursue the deeper pleasure of satisfaction in work and in relationships.
3、不必要的改變?nèi)朔Q，比如：
Now more than ever, parents need to be in touch with their children's activities because modern life has the tendency to cause cleavages in the family. You need to arrange family like it so that family members will do things together and know one another. You need to give up isolated pleasures of your own and realize that parents have a set of obligations to sponsor togetherness and therefore sponsor knowledge.
因此寫作中，一定要注意時態(tài)，人稱以及數(shù)的變化是否正確，要注意保持一致。
英語作文的書寫格式
英文書寫應(yīng)符合書寫規(guī)范，英文字母要寫清楚、寫整齊、寫美觀，字母的大小和字母之間的距離要勻稱。書寫應(yīng)做到字形秀麗漂亮，通篇勻稱和諧。
寫英文字母要掌握正確筆順。如字母i，應(yīng)該先寫下面的部分，然后再打點。有的學(xué)生卻按寫漢字的習(xí)慣從上到下寫，寫快了，就會把點和下面的十筆連在量起，顯得十分別扭。字形t應(yīng)為兩筆。不少人卻將兩筆合成一筆，看上去不像t，倒像l或是e，難以辨認(rèn)。另外，把r寫成v，把q寫成把g，把k寫成h等等，都是中學(xué)生書寫中常見的毛病。
不少人在四線三格的練習(xí)紙上書寫尚有規(guī)矩，能按字母的占格、高低和大小要求書寫，但在白紙或橫線紙上書寫，卻顯得十分幼稚拙劣。字母或跳上跳下，或一律寫成同一高度，占上中兩格的字母與占中下兩格的字母完全沒有高低之別。這些現(xiàn)象都要防止。
另外，書寫時還要注意詞與詞之間要保持一定的距離，不能緊靠在一起。字母之間的連寫也應(yīng)該按照習(xí)慣，不能隨意亂來。
在一篇字?jǐn)?shù)有限的作文里，我們還要注意盡量不把一個單詞拆開移行。萬一要移行，則必須以音節(jié)為單位進(jìn)行，如revolution這個詞，依照音節(jié)移行的原則可以按re-，revo-, revolu-這幾種方法移行。在移行時，我們還應(yīng)特別注意以下幾點:
1. 單音節(jié)詞不能移行，即使是字母較多的單音節(jié)詞，如through等也不能例外。
2．縮略詞如Mr.，Dr.等不能和后面的名字拆開移行。
縮略的專用名詞如U．K.，U．S．A等也不能拆開移行。
3．時間、量度及貨幣單位應(yīng)視為一個整體；不能分開移行。如；
11：00P.M.應(yīng)寫在一行內(nèi)，不能將11：00和P．M．分開移行；寫38℃時，不能將38和℃分開移行。
4．由“年、月、日”表示的日期，如果必須分開移行只能將“月、日”與“年”分開。如January 6，1980不能將January和6分開移行，但可以把January 6，和1980分成兩行。
5．含雙寫輔音字母的單詞，在移行時要將輔音字母拆開。如better可拆成better，necessary可拆成necessary。
但如果雙寫輔音字母屬于詞根，后面又加了后綴，就不能將兩個輔音字母拆開。如drill加上-ing后構(gòu)成了drilling，就不可以將它拆成成dril-ling，而只能拆為drilling。
例文：
1.寵物：
A Talkative Parrot
A lady worked in a company. There were a lot of shops on her way to work. One morning, when she was walking to work, she passed by a new pet shop. She was so excited when she saw a parrot sitting beside the door. She really loved birds.
When she stopped to look at the handsome bird, it said to her, "Hey, lady, you are really ugly.”
This made the lady very angry. She quickly left the shop and went to work. On her way home, she passed the same pet shop again. This time the parrot saw her again, it said immediately:
"Hey lady, you are really ugly!"
The lady tried to control herself. She walked to the shopkeeper and told him that if the parrot said it again, she would have the police come and take it away. "I'm so sorry, madam. I promise it won't happen again," the shopkeeper said.
The next morning, when the lady walked past the pet shop, she pretended that she didn’t see it. But the parrot saw her at once and said to her quickly, "Hey lady."
She stopped and looked at the bird coldly. "Yes?" she answered in an angry voice.
The bird, sitting up straight and smiling at her, said, "You know."
2.人物：
Elizabeth Bennet （伊麗莎白）
The second daughter in the Bennet family, and the most intelligent and quick-witted, Elizabeth is the protagonist of Pride and Prejudice and one of the most well-known female characters in English literature. Her admirable qualities are numerous—she is lovely, clever, and, in a novel defined by dialogue, she converses as brilliantly as anyone. Her honesty, virtue, and lively wit enable her to rise above the nonsense and bad behavior that pervade her class-bound and often spiteful society. Nevertheless, her sharp tongue and tendency to make hasty judgments often lead her astray; Pride and Prejudice is essentially the story of how she (and her true love, Darcy) overcome all obstacles—including their own personal failings—to find romantic happiness. Elizabeth must not only cope with a hopeless mother, a distant father, two badly behaved younger siblings, and several snobbish, antagonizing females, she must also overcome her own mistaken impressions of Darcy, which initially lead her to reject his proposals of marriage. Her charms are sufficient to keep him interested, fortunately, while she navigates familial and social turmoil. As she gradually comes to recognize the nobility of Darcy’s character, she realizes the error of her initial prejudice against him.
Bennet家庭的第二個女兒和最聰明和機智，伊麗莎白是自豪感和偏見的主演和其中一個在英國文學(xué)的最知名的女性角色。 她令人敬佩的質(zhì)量是numerous—she是可愛的，聰明，并且，在對話定義的小說，她一樣精采地交談象任何人。 她的誠實、美德和活潑的機智使她在胡話之上起來，并且彌漫她的壞行為類跳起和經(jīng)常惡意的社會。 然而，她的伶俐的口舌和傾向經(jīng)常做倉促評斷帶領(lǐng)她迷路; 自豪感和偏見本質(zhì)上是故事她(和她真實的愛， Darcy)怎樣克服他們自己的個人failings—to發(fā)現(xiàn)浪漫幸福的所有obstacles—including。 伊麗莎白必須不僅應(yīng)付一個絕望的母親，一個遙遠(yuǎn)的父親，二非常表現(xiàn)的更加年輕的兄弟姐妹，并且?guī)孜粍堇瑢沟呐裕仨氁部朔﨑arcy她自己的錯誤印象，最初帶領(lǐng)她拒絕他的求婚。 而她駕駛家族和社會動亂，她魅力是充足保持他感興趣，幸運地。 當(dāng)她逐漸來認(rèn)可Darcy’s字符的貴族，她體會她對他的最初的偏見錯誤。
一、寫作
(一)存在問題
1.不會寫
所謂不會寫指的是，當(dāng)考試拿過一篇文章不知如何下手，不知如何提筆進(jìn)行寫作。筆者認(rèn)為主要是存在以下兩個原因：一是考生的確無話可說；二是心里雖然有話，但是拿捏不準(zhǔn)該寫哪句為妙。于是思前想后、猶豫不決，始終不敢提筆進(jìn)行寫作。
2.寫不好
所謂寫不好就是，拿過作文題，沒有明確的寫作思路，不按套路出牌；或是簡單漢語邏輯思維寫作，不符合英語寫作標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，近而沒有文采。原因在于：第一是平時沒有養(yǎng)成良好的寫作習(xí)慣；第二對于英語寫作的句式特點以及整體文章結(jié)構(gòu)框架不了解。
(二)解決辦法
第一，首先必須熟悉英語四級寫作具體要求。英語四級考試要求考生在30分鐘內(nèi)寫出120字的文章。體材主要有議論文(分為“Topic題型”和 A&B又稱“正反觀點題”)應(yīng)用文(主要是書信)、圖表文等。針對不同的體裁，寫作思路是不同的。比如，以議論文舉例來說：
1.議論文寫作思路
2.議論文分類：闡述主題型作文(Topic)；正反觀點型作文(A&B)
3.闡述主題型作文寫作：(這類題型作文要求從一句話或一個主題出發(fā)，按照提綱的要求進(jìn)行論述)
(1)基本寫作格式
5. 正反觀點型作文(A&B)(這類題型作文通常從正反兩方面來分別論述，最后得出你自己的結(jié)論。采用論點加論據(jù)寫作形式。)
(1)基本寫作格式
第二，熟悉英語寫作的幾個重要概念。
1.英語文章段落結(jié)構(gòu)特點
英語文章段落結(jié)構(gòu)一般有三部分構(gòu)成：主題句+擴展句+結(jié)尾句
(1)主題句：所謂主題句，就是英語文章段落的中心思想句。它是英語文章段落的靈魂，在英語文章段落中居于主導(dǎo)地位。我們都知道英語文章一般喜歡開門見山，所以主題句一般位于英語文章段落的句首。其他句子都要圍繞它而展開。
(2)擴展句：所謂擴展句就是為主題句起解釋說明或論證的句子。通常我們寫擴展句所采用的方法是舉例子(for example, for instance, such as, a case in point is that---)、列數(shù)據(jù)(according to the recent study/survey,---)等。
(3)結(jié)尾句：所謂結(jié)尾句就是總結(jié)句。英語寫作也類似于漢語寫作，最后再把自己本段落的寫作目的陳述一下。但是在英語寫作中結(jié)尾句畢竟還是少數(shù)。
因此我們通常看到英語的文章段落結(jié)構(gòu) 60%-70%都是由主題句+擴展句構(gòu)成。
2.主旨句
作為主旨句就是英語文章的中心思想句。英語文章一般首先用一句話概括一下作者的寫作目的或意圖，我們就把這句話稱之為主旨句。沒有受過寫作訓(xùn)練的考生是不會寫主旨句的。因此這樣的文章就不能夠稱之為好的英語文章，自然也得不到閱卷人的青睞了。
第三，學(xué)會遣詞造句
1.遣詞：
(1)詞匯等級
所謂詞匯的等級就是，我們在寫作的過程中，如果想出一個基本詞匯來之后，能夠在這個基本詞匯的基礎(chǔ)上把它在提升一下，也就是我們一般寫作所提倡的用“難詞 ”。比如，我們一提到“重要的”，大多數(shù)同學(xué)首先會想到“important”這個單詞，那么提升一下的話就可以想到它的如下同義詞：significant, vital, main, basilica, crucial, momentous etc
(2)詞匯準(zhǔn)確性
所謂詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性是指，我們在有一個詞近而想到它的同義詞之后，要結(jié)合語境選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)挠迷~。在這里必須指明的是，并不是詞匯等級越高越好，必須還要考慮到適合于不同的語境。比如，眼睛大，這個“大的”形容詞，我們首先會想到big,近而想到great, large, huge, vast, titanic, enormous etc。那么是不是用后面的詞就可以了呢？或者說用上enormous等詞更能博得閱卷人的好感呢？答案是否定的。在這里很明顯用后面的詞來修飾眼睛是不可以，只能用big，因為我們聽過一首英文歌曲叫做“I am a big big girl, in a big big world.”big表示眼睛大而迷人可愛的。
2.造句：
(1)詞組
很多考生平時寫作不太擅長用詞組，對于他們而言最習(xí)慣的就是想到漢語，然后對應(yīng)漢語思維寫出英語句子，這種寫作只能是單詞的羅列組合，談不上什么技巧文采可言，因此，寫出來的文章必然就是所謂平淡如流水，沒有英語的味道。如果我們能夠在單詞的基礎(chǔ)上，進(jìn)一步想到與之同義的詞組，那么文章就會顯得與眾不同，更具有英語的味道。比如上面所說的“重要的”這個單詞，當(dāng)我們想到important的時候，如果從語法角度再稍加考慮一下，我們會想到“be of importance”。因為，語法中規(guī)定：形容詞等于of加這個形容詞的名詞形式。如果再提升一步，我們還學(xué)過一個常用的詞組叫做“play an important role in---”。很多同學(xué)說自己的文章湊不夠字?jǐn)?shù)或是沒有文采，那么采用詞組進(jìn)行寫作是不是就可以解決以上問題了呢？
(2)句式
除了采用詞組，要使文章更具英語的味道，我們還需要變換句式。沒有受過正規(guī)作文訓(xùn)練的考生，通常采用的句式多為主謂賓、主系表。于是我們看到大多數(shù)的文章充斥著這樣的形式：I am a good boy, and I am a student. I study in Shandong University, and I have three years experience in Qilu Hotel.這樣流水帳式的文章顯然不能得到高分。
寫作中閱卷人喜歡的句式有以下兩種：一是插入語；二是倒裝。
第一，插入語。
所謂插入語，英語中有兩種形式。一種是有兩個逗號之間引起的成分稱之為插入語；第二種是有兩個半破折號引起的成分稱之為插入語。如下所示(黑體劃線處)：
Jinan, the Spring City, is a famous tourist city.
Other people may give us instrumental support—financial aid, material resources, and needed services—that reduces stress by helping us resolve and cope with our problems.
插入語的作用主要有兩個，一個是突出主語，比如說：He, who would like to play basketball, is a good student.
第二個作用是解釋說明，比如說：People, especially students, should work hard.
第二，倒裝
倒裝是我們寫作中需要用到的。雖然略顯俗套，但是卻是很能滿足閱卷人的主觀感受的。常用的倒裝形式有以下幾種：
Only + 時間狀語
Only when all of us join in the efforts of eliminating cheating at all levels can we expect to have a cleaner society and a more beautiful future.
Only + 介詞詞組
Only by planning his time care fully can he improve efficiency and make achievements.
Only in this way can we master the writing skills step by steps.
否定詞位于句首(hardly when; never; not only---,but also---; seldom)
在我一生當(dāng)中很難遇到這樣的人
Seldom in my life have I met such a kind-hearted man.
地點方位名詞位于句首
In no other place in the world can one find such enthusiasm for applying for hosting the 2008 Olympic Games.
(3)修辭
無論是漢語寫作還是英語寫作，修辭其實非常的重要。它是作者寫作功底具體事例地展現(xiàn)。所謂修辭包括比喻、擬人、排比等等。英語寫作中的修辭問題我已經(jīng)專門寫過一篇文章(見《英語寫作幾種修辭手法》)。這里僅舉一個比喻例子，還是拿“重要的”來舉例。當(dāng)你用完詞組之后，如果你用上下面比如句子，則文章就會顯得神采飛揚，試比較：
The bicycle is important for us.
The bicycle is of importance for us.
The bicycle plays an important role in our life.
The bicycle, environmental friendliness vehicle, plays an important role in our life.
The bicycle is like the air, water, and sunshine and cannot be parted with a moment in our life.
那么很明顯，最后一個句子是我們最終拿到考場上去搏擊高分的句子。
第四，平時要注意積累
很多考生為了寫好作文也作了好多工作，課下也付出了很多，包括背誦大量的文章等等，但是提筆寫作時候，仍不見的有所改觀。問題在哪里呢？
我認(rèn)為，很多考生雖然也背誦文章，但卻只是死記硬背。如果合上書本讓他復(fù)述，他們就會卡殼。就是茶壺里煮餃子，倒不出來。我們說背誦是個輸入的過程，而說和寫則是輸出的過程。我們真正需要的是把平時積累的隨時隨地用在我們的寫作中。因此，我們在注重積累的同時，一定在平時練習(xí)的時候，把他們多家運用。只有多練多用，才能真正達(dá)到學(xué)以致用，才能真正提高寫作水平。(濟(jì)南新東方學(xué)校 趙曉棟)
特別說明：由于各方面情況的不斷調(diào)整與變化，搜學(xué)網(wǎng)所提供的考試信息僅供參考，敬請考生以權(quán)威部門公布的正式信息為準(zhǔn)。
寫作是語言應(yīng)用的一個重要方面，也是語言能力測定的重要手段，衡量寫作水平的 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)便是看其是否能用學(xué)過的語言材料，語法知識等用文字的形式來表達(dá)描述。 書面語言表達(dá)一般分為三個過程：思維、組織、表達(dá)。先是思維，把要寫的東西在腦中 思考，這往往是個別的，孤立的一些素材，很凌亂瑣碎；因此要對此進(jìn)行組織，把這些思維 作出整理，使其條理、系統(tǒng)化，但這還是較粗糙的，可能還有一些用詞不當(dāng)或語言錯誤；最 后才是表達(dá)，把組織過的材料仔細(xì)推敲，確無問題了再落筆成文。在撰寫時要注意主謂語一 致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等，這就是寫作。上述的三個過程，最難的就是第三個過程，這需 要我們有較好的語法知識，掌握一定數(shù)量的句型，習(xí)慣用語，熟練的寫作技巧，這樣才能寫 出通順生動的文章來。 總之，要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧。 那么，究竟怎樣才能寫好作文呢？ 閱讀優(yōu)秀范文 首先要搞好閱讀。閱讀是寫作的基礎(chǔ)，在閱讀方面下的功夫越深，駕馭語言的能力也就 越強。所以要寫好英語先要讀好英語，在語言學(xué)習(xí)方面狠下苦功，教科書要讀透，因為教科 書中的文章都是一些很好的范文，文筆流暢，語言規(guī)范，精彩的一些課文段落要背誦。再就 是要進(jìn)行大量課外閱讀，并記住一些好文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。 加強練詞造句訓(xùn)練 其次，要加強練詞造句的訓(xùn)練。詞句對作文相當(dāng)于造房的材料，無好材料就造不出好房 子。平時在學(xué)習(xí)閱讀時要注意收集積累，把好的詞語、短語、句型做好筆記。平時在練習(xí)中 的錯誤也要做好記錄，再對照正確句子，使地道的英語句子如同條件反射，落筆就對。 了解英語寫作格式 還有，要了解英語寫作的不同體裁與格式。可以先看一本介紹英 語寫作入門的書，對英語寫作有一個初步的概念，如怎么寫議論文，如何提出論據(jù)，如何展 開，如何確定中心句；又如，英語信的格式，如何根據(jù)不同身份寫不同結(jié)束語等，然后根據(jù) 不同的體裁進(jìn)行寫作練習(xí)。 用英語寫日記 要養(yǎng)成記英語日記勤練筆的好習(xí)慣。經(jīng)常用英語記日記，等于天天在練筆，這無疑是提 高英語協(xié)作的行之有效的好辦法。在記日記時，不要總是用簡單句，要有意識地用一些好的 詞組、句型、關(guān)聯(lián)詞和復(fù)合句等，使文句更優(yōu)美生動。還有要按照題目或所給情景寫文章練 筆。寫好后對照范文，找出差距，然后再練習(xí)，這對提高英語作文也很有幫助，在游泳中學(xué) 會游泳，只有多練習(xí)才能練好。 總之，平時學(xué)習(xí)語言素材積累多了，體裁格式記住了又經(jīng)常練習(xí)不斷提高，到作文下筆 時就會得心應(yīng)手，水到渠成。
標(biāo)準(zhǔn)便是看其是否能用學(xué)過的語言材料，語法知識等用文字的形式來表達(dá)描述。 書面語言表達(dá)一般分為三個過程：思維、組織、表達(dá)。先是思維，把要寫的東西在腦中 思考，這往往是個別的，孤立的一些素材，很凌亂瑣碎；因此要對此進(jìn)行組織，把這些思維 作出整理，使其條理、系統(tǒng)化，但這還是較粗糙的，可能還有一些用詞不當(dāng)或語言錯誤；最 后才是表達(dá)，把組織過的材料仔細(xì)推敲，確無問題了再落筆成文。在撰寫時要注意主謂語一 致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等，這就是寫作。上述的三個過程，最難的就是第三個過程，這需 要我們有較好的語法知識，掌握一定數(shù)量的句型，習(xí)慣用語，熟練的寫作技巧，這樣才能寫 出通順生動的文章來。 總之，要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧。 那么，究竟怎樣才能寫好作文呢？ 閱讀優(yōu)秀范文 首先要搞好閱讀。閱讀是寫作的基礎(chǔ)，在閱讀方面下的功夫越深，駕馭語言的能力也就 越強。所以要寫好英語先要讀好英語，在語言學(xué)習(xí)方面狠下苦功，教科書要讀透，因為教科 書中的文章都是一些很好的范文，文筆流暢，語言規(guī)范，精彩的一些課文段落要背誦。再就 是要進(jìn)行大量課外閱讀，并記住一些好文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。 加強練詞造句訓(xùn)練 其次，要加強練詞造句的訓(xùn)練。詞句對作文相當(dāng)于造房的材料，無好材料就造不出好房 子。平時在學(xué)習(xí)閱讀時要注意收集積累，把好的詞語、短語、句型做好筆記。平時在練習(xí)中 的錯誤也要做好記錄，再對照正確句子， 了解英語寫作格式 還有，要了解英語寫作的不同體裁與格式。可以先看一本介紹英 語寫作入門的書，對英語寫作有一個初步的概念，如怎么寫議論文，如何提出論據(jù)，如何展 開，如何確定中心句；又如，英語信的格式，如何根據(jù)不同身份寫不同結(jié)束語等，然后根據(jù) 不同的體裁進(jìn)行寫作練習(xí)。 用英語寫日記 要養(yǎng)成記英語日記勤練筆的好習(xí)慣。經(jīng)常用英語記日記，等于天天在練筆，這無疑是提 高英語協(xié)作的行之有效的好辦法。在記日記時，不要總是用簡單句，要有意識地用一些好的 詞組、句型、關(guān)聯(lián)詞和復(fù)合句等，使文句更優(yōu)美生動。還有要按照題目或所給情景寫文章練 筆。寫好后對照范文，找出差距，然后再練習(xí)，這對提高英語作文也很有幫助，在游泳中學(xué) 會游泳，只有多練習(xí)才能練好。 總之，平時學(xué)習(xí)語言素材積累多了，體裁格式記住了又經(jīng)常練習(xí)不斷提高，到作文下筆 時就會得心應(yīng)手，水到渠成。
老師教我們的：先一句一句的寫，在用關(guān)聯(lián)詞連起來。
MY favorite subject
my favorite subject is English. We can learn many grammars and words through it and we also can know foreigners' culture.In English class,we listen to teacher and answer the questions to improve our english.
why do I like it?well,as you can see,I can learn a lot from it and It is very interesting for me to read english book,listen english songs.not just I like it but my teacher encourage me to speak english.
do you like english?I will give you some advice .The first ,you should listen to your teacher carefully and take notes.Then,you could chat with your friends in english ,you can learn from each other.The important is you must love it ,because interest is the best teacher.
I love english,and I believe that:don't be shy,just have a try!
我用了一些很實用的結(jié)構(gòu)和單詞，希望對你有幫助！
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首先，一個段落必須有一個中心即主題思想，該中心由主題句特別是其中的題旨來表達(dá)。整個段落必須緊扣這個主題（stick or hold to the topic），這就是段落的統(tǒng)一性（unity）。其次，一個段落必須有若干推展句，使主題思想得到充分展開，從而給讀者一個完整的感覺，這就是完整性（completeness or adequateness）。再者，一個段落不是雜亂無章的，而是有機的組合，句子的排列順序必須合乎邏輯，從一個句子到另一個句子的過渡必須流暢（smooth），這就是連貫性（coherence）。下面我們就對這三個標(biāo)準(zhǔn)分別加以說明。
1、統(tǒng)一性
一個段落內(nèi)的各個句子必須從屬于一個中心，任何游離于中心思想之外的句子都是不可取的。請看下例：
Joe and I decided to take the long trip we'd always wanted across the country. We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner. To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico.
本段的主題句是段首句，controlling idea（中心思想）是take the long trip across the country。文中出現(xiàn)兩個irrelevant sentences，一個是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie，這一段是講的是Joe and I ，中間出現(xiàn)一個Bella是不合適的。還有，Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner這一句更是與主題句不相關(guān)。再看一個例子：
My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again. I bought two new suitcases last week. Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was a premature baby.
本段的controlling idea 是like to deep physically fit，但段中有兩個irrelevant sentences，一個是I bought two new suitcases last week，另一個是My mother was a premature baby。
從上面兩個例子可以看出，native speakers同樣會造出來irrelevant sentences。卷面上如果這種句子多了，造成偏題或離題，那問題就更嚴(yán)重了。
2、完整性
正象我們前面說得那樣，一個段落的主題思想靠推展句來實現(xiàn)，如果只有主題句而沒有推展句來進(jìn)一步交待和充實，就不能構(gòu)成一個完整的段落。同樣，雖然有推展句，但主題思想沒有得到相對圓滿的交待，給讀者一種意猶未盡的感覺。這樣的段落也不能完成其交際功能。例如：
Physical work can be a useful form of therapy for a mind in turmoil. Work concentrates your thoughts on a concrete task. Besides, it is more useful to work —— you produce something rather than more anxiety or depression.
本段的主題句是段首句。本段的兩個推展句均不能回答主題句中提出的問題。什么是“a mind in turmoil”（心境不平靜）Physical work又如何能改變這種情況？為什么它能起therapy的作用？讀者得不到明確的答案。因此，要達(dá)到完整就必須盡可能地簡明。例如：
It is not always true that a good picture is worth a thousand words. Often writing is much clearer than a picture. It is sometimes difficult to figure out what a picture means, but a careful writer can almost always explain it.
段首句所表達(dá)的主題思想是一種看法，必須有具體事例加以驗證。上述兩個推展句只是在文字上對主題作些解釋，整個段落內(nèi)容空洞，簡而不明。如果用一兩個具體的例子的話，就可以把主題解釋清楚了。比如下段：
It is not always true that a picture is worth a thousand words. Sometimes, pictures are pretty useless things. If you can't swim and fall in the river and start gulping water, will you be better off to hold up a picture of yourself drowning, or start screaming "Help"?
3、連貫性（coherence）
連貫性包括意連和形連兩個方面，前者指的是內(nèi)在的邏輯性，后者指的是使用轉(zhuǎn)換詞語。當(dāng)然這兩者常常是不可分割的。只有形連而沒有意連，句子之間就沒有內(nèi)在的有機的聯(lián)系；反之，只有意連而沒有形連，有時行文就不夠流暢。
1）、意連
段落中句子的排列應(yīng)遵循一定的次序，不能想到什么就寫什么。如果在下筆之前沒有構(gòu)思，邊寫邊想，寫寫停停，那就寫不出一氣呵成的好文章來。下面介紹幾種常見的排列方式。
A．按時間先后排列（chronological arrangement）
We had a number of close calls that day. When we rose, it was obviously late and we had to hurry so as not to miss breakfast; we knew the dining room staff was strict about closing at nine o'clock. Then, when we had been driving in the desert for nearly two hours —— it must have been close to noon —— the heat nearly hid us in; the radiator boiled over and we had to use most of our drinking water to cool it down. By the time we reached the mountain, it was our o'clock and we were exhausted. Here, judgement ran out of us and we started the tough climb to the summit, not realizing that darkness came suddenly in the desert. Sure enough, by six we were struggling and Andrew very nearly went down a steep cliff, dragging Mohammed and me along with him. By nine, when the wind howled across the flat ledge of the summit, we knew as we shivered together for warmth that it had not been our lucky day.
本段從“rose”（起床）寫起，然后是吃早餐（“not to miss breakfast”, “closing at nine o'clock”），然后是“close to noon”，一直寫到這一天結(jié)束（“By nine——”）。
B. 按位置遠(yuǎn)近排列（spatial arrangement）。例如：
From a distance, it looked like a skinny tube, but as we got closer, we could see it flesh out before our eyes. It was tubular, all right, but fatter than we could see from far away. Furthermore, we were also astonished to notice that the building was really in two parts: a pagoda sitting on top of a tubular one-story structure. Standing ten feet away, we could marvel at how much of the pagoda was made up of glass windows. Almost everything under the wonderful Chinese roof was made of glass, unlike the tube that it was sitting on, which only had four. Inside, the tube was gloomy, because of the lack of light. Then a steep, narrow staircase took us up inside the pagoda and the light changed dramatically. All those windows let in a flood of sunshine and we could see out for miles across the flat land.
本段的寫法是由遠(yuǎn)及近，從遠(yuǎn)處（“from a distance”）寫起，然后“get closer”，再到（“ten feet away”），最后是“inside the pagoda”……當(dāng)然，按位置遠(yuǎn)近來寫不等于都是由遠(yuǎn)及近。根據(jù)需要，也可以由近及遠(yuǎn)，由表及里等等。
C. 按邏輯關(guān)系排列（logical arrangement）
a. 按重要性順序排列（arrangement in order of importance）
If you work as a soda jerker, you will, of course, not need much skill in expressing yourself to be effective. If you work on a machine, your ability to express yourself will be of little importance. But as soon as you move one step up from the bottom, your effectiveness depends on your ability to reach others through the spoken or the written word. And the further away your job is from manual work, the larger the organization of which you are an employee, the more important it will be that you know how to convey your thoughts in writing or speaking. In the very large business organization, whether it is the government, the large corporation, or the Army, this ability to express oneself is perhaps the most important of all the skills a man can possess.
這一段談的是表達(dá)能力，它的重要性與職業(yè)，身份有關(guān)，從“not need much skill”或“of little importance”到“more important”，最后是“most important”。
b.由一般到特殊排列（general-to-specific arrangement）
If a reader is lost, it is generally because the writer has not been careful enough to keep him on the path. This carelessness can take any number of forms. Perhaps a sentence is so excessively cluttered that the reader, hacking his way through the verbiage, simply doesn't know what it means. Perhaps a sentence has been so shoddily constructed that the reader could read it in any of several ways. Perhaps the writer has switched tenses, or has switched pronouns in mid-sentence, so the reader loses track of when the action took place or who is talking. Perhaps sentence B is not logical sequel to sentence A —— the writer, in whose head the connection is clear, has not bothered to provide the missing link. Perhaps the writer has used an important word incorrectly by not taking the trouble to look it up. He may think that "sanguine" and "sanguinary" mean the same thing, but the difference is a bloody big one. The reader can only infer what the writer is trying to imply.
這一段談的是a writer's carelessness，先給出一個general statement作為主題句，然后通過5個 ”perhaps”加以例證。
c. 由特殊到一般排列（specific-to-general arrangement）
I do not understand why people confuse my Siamese cat, Prissy, with the one I had several years ago, Henry. The two cats are only alike in breed. Prissy, a quiet, feminine feline, loves me dearly but not possessively. She likes to keep her distance from people, exert her independence and is never so rude as to beg, lick, or sniff unceremoniously. Her usual posture is sitting upright, eyes closed, perfectly still. Prissy is a very proper cat. Henry, on the other hand, loved me dearly but possessively. He was my shadow from morning till night. He expected me to constantly entertain him. Henry never cared who saw him do anything, whether it was decorous or not, and he usually offended my friends in some way. The cat made himself quite comfortable, on the top of the television, across stranger's feet or laps, in beds, drawers, sacks, closets, or nooks. The difference between them is imperceptible to strangers.
本段的主題句是段首句，它僅提出一個問題：為什么兩只貓會被搞混。然后對兩者進(jìn)行比較，末句才下結(jié)論。
2）、形連
行文的邏輯性常常要靠適當(dāng)?shù)霓D(zhuǎn)換詞語及其他手段來實現(xiàn)。請讀下面這一段文字并找出文中用以承上啟下的詞語：
Walter's goal in life was to become a successful surgeon. First, though, he had to get through high school, so he concentrated all his efforts on his studies —— in particular, biology, chemistry, and math. Because he worked constantly on these subjects, Walter became proficient in them; however, Walter forgot that he needed to master other subjects besides those he had chosen. As a result, during his junior year of high school, Walter failed both English and Latin. Consequently, he had to repeat these subjects and he was almost unable to graduate on schedule. Finally, on June 6, Walter achieved the first step toward realizing his goal.
本文中起承上啟下的詞語有兩種，一種是轉(zhuǎn)換詞語（transitional words or phrases），另一種是起轉(zhuǎn)換作用的其他連接手段（linking devices）。前者依次有：first, though, so, in particular, and, because, however, besides, as a result, both…and, consequently, and, finally.后者依次是：he, he, his, his, he, these, them, he, those, his, he, these, his. 本段中共有詞匯105個，所使用的轉(zhuǎn)換詞語及其他連接用語共26個詞，約占該段總詞匯量的四分之一。由此可見，掌握好transitions不僅對行文的流（smoothness）有益，而且對于學(xué)生在半個小時內(nèi)寫120個詞也是不無好處的。
一個段落里如果沒有transitions也就很難有coherence了.我們看下面一個例子：
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds. Writing uses written symbols. Speech developed about 500 000 years ago. Written language is a recent development. It was invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal. The word choice of writing is often relatively formal. Pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from. Pronunciation and accent are ignored in writing. A standard diction and spelling system prevails in the written language of most countries. Speech relies on gesture, loudness, and rise and fall of the voice. Writing lacks gesture, loudness and the rise and fall of the voice. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences.
本段中除了第6句開頭出現(xiàn)一個起過渡作用的”it”之外，沒有使用其他的過渡詞語.這樣，文中出現(xiàn)許多重復(fù)的詞語，全段讀起來也顯得生硬而不自然。如果加上必要的過渡詞語來修飾的話，這一段就成了下面一個流暢連貫的段落：
Speaking and writing are different in many ways. Speech depends on sounds; writing, on the other hand, uses written symbols. Speech was developed about 500 000 years ago, but written language is a recent development, invented only about six thousand years ago. Speech is usually informal, while the word choice of writing, by contrast, is often relatively formal. Although pronunciation and accent often tell where the speaker is from, they are ignored in wiring because a standard diction and spelling system prevails in most countries. Speech relies on gesture, loudness, and the rise and fall of the voice, but writing lacks these features. Careful speakers and writers are aware of the differences．
4、有損連貫性的幾種情況：
考生在寫作中經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)下面幾種錯誤：
1、不必要的改變時態(tài)，比如：
In the movie, Robert Redford was a spy. He goes to his office where he found everybody dead. Other spies wanted to kill him, so he takes refuge with Julie Christie. At her house, he had waited for the heat to die down, but they come after him anyway.
2、不必要的改變單復(fù)數(shù)，比如：
Everybody looks for satisfaction in his life. They want to be happy. But if he seeks only pleasure in the short run, the person will soon run out of pleasure and life will catch up to him. They need to pursue the deeper pleasure of satisfaction in work and in relationships.
3、不必要的改變?nèi)朔Q，比如：
Now more than ever, parents need to be in touch with their children's activities because modern life has the tendency to cause cleavages in the family. You need to arrange family like it so that family members will do things together and know one another. You need to give up isolated pleasures of your own and realize that parents have a set of obligations to sponsor togetherness and therefore sponsor knowledge.
因此寫作中，一定要注意時態(tài)，人稱以及數(shù)的變化是否正確，要注意保持一致。
英語作文的書寫格式
英文書寫應(yīng)符合書寫規(guī)范，英文字母要寫清楚、寫整齊、寫美觀，字母的大小和字母之間的距離要勻稱。書寫應(yīng)做到字形秀麗漂亮，通篇勻稱和諧。
寫英文字母要掌握正確筆順。如字母i，應(yīng)該先寫下面的部分，然后再打點。有的學(xué)生卻按寫漢字的習(xí)慣從上到下寫，寫快了，就會把點和下面的十筆連在量起，顯得十分別扭。字形t應(yīng)為兩筆。不少人卻將兩筆合成一筆，看上去不像t，倒像l或是e，難以辨認(rèn)。另外，把r寫成v，把q寫成把g，把k寫成h等等，都是中學(xué)生書寫中常見的毛病。
不少人在四線三格的練習(xí)紙上書寫尚有規(guī)矩，能按字母的占格、高低和大小要求書寫，但在白紙或橫線紙上書寫，卻顯得十分幼稚拙劣。字母或跳上跳下，或一律寫成同一高度，占上中兩格的字母與占中下兩格的字母完全沒有高低之別。這些現(xiàn)象都要防止。
另外，書寫時還要注意詞與詞之間要保持一定的距離，不能緊靠在一起。字母之間的連寫也應(yīng)該按照習(xí)慣，不能隨意亂來。
在一篇字?jǐn)?shù)有限的作文里，我們還要注意盡量不把一個單詞拆開移行。萬一要移行，則必須以音節(jié)為單位進(jìn)行，如revolution這個詞，依照音節(jié)移行的原則可以按re-，revo-, revolu-這幾種方法移行。在移行時，我們還應(yīng)特別注意以下幾點:
1. 單音節(jié)詞不能移行，即使是字母較多的單音節(jié)詞，如through等也不能例外。
2．縮略詞如Mr.，Dr.等不能和后面的名字拆開移行。
縮略的專用名詞如U．K.，U．S．A等也不能拆開移行。
3．時間、量度及貨幣單位應(yīng)視為一個整體；不能分開移行。如；
11：00P.M.應(yīng)寫在一行內(nèi)，不能將11：00和P．M．分開移行；寫38℃時，不能將38和℃分開移行。
4．由“年、月、日”表示的日期，如果必須分開移行只能將“月、日”與“年”分開。如January 6，1980不能將January和6分開移行，但可以把January 6，和1980分成兩行。
5．含雙寫輔音字母的單詞，在移行時要將輔音字母拆開。如better可拆成better，necessary可拆成necessary。
但如果雙寫輔音字母屬于詞根，后面又加了后綴，就不能將兩個輔音字母拆開。如drill加上-ing后構(gòu)成了drilling，就不可以將它拆成成dril-ling，而只能拆為drilling。
例文：
1.寵物：
A Talkative Parrot
A lady worked in a company. There were a lot of shops on her way to work. One morning, when she was walking to work, she passed by a new pet shop. She was so excited when she saw a parrot sitting beside the door. She really loved birds.
When she stopped to look at the handsome bird, it said to her, "Hey, lady, you are really ugly.”
This made the lady very angry. She quickly left the shop and went to work. On her way home, she passed the same pet shop again. This time the parrot saw her again, it said immediately:
"Hey lady, you are really ugly!"
The lady tried to control herself. She walked to the shopkeeper and told him that if the parrot said it again, she would have the police come and take it away. "I'm so sorry, madam. I promise it won't happen again," the shopkeeper said.
The next morning, when the lady walked past the pet shop, she pretended that she didn’t see it. But the parrot saw her at once and said to her quickly, "Hey lady."
She stopped and looked at the bird coldly. "Yes?" she answered in an angry voice.
The bird, sitting up straight and smiling at her, said, "You know."
2.人物：
Elizabeth Bennet （伊麗莎白）
The second daughter in the Bennet family, and the most intelligent and quick-witted, Elizabeth is the protagonist of Pride and Prejudice and one of the most well-known female characters in English literature. Her admirable qualities are numerous—she is lovely, clever, and, in a novel defined by dialogue, she converses as brilliantly as anyone. Her honesty, virtue, and lively wit enable her to rise above the nonsense and bad behavior that pervade her class-bound and often spiteful society. Nevertheless, her sharp tongue and tendency to make hasty judgments often lead her astray; Pride and Prejudice is essentially the story of how she (and her true love, Darcy) overcome all obstacles—including their own personal failings—to find romantic happiness. Elizabeth must not only cope with a hopeless mother, a distant father, two badly behaved younger siblings, and several snobbish, antagonizing females, she must also overcome her own mistaken impressions of Darcy, which initially lead her to reject his proposals of marriage. Her charms are sufficient to keep him interested, fortunately, while she navigates familial and social turmoil. As she gradually comes to recognize the nobility of Darcy’s character, she realizes the error of her initial prejudice against him.
Bennet家庭的第二個女兒和最聰明和機智，伊麗莎白是自豪感和偏見的主演和其中一個在英國文學(xué)的最知名的女性角色。 她令人敬佩的質(zhì)量是numerous—she是可愛的，聰明，并且，在對話定義的小說，她一樣精采地交談象任何人。 她的誠實、美德和活潑的機智使她在胡話之上起來，并且彌漫她的壞行為類跳起和經(jīng)常惡意的社會。 然而，她的伶俐的口舌和傾向經(jīng)常做倉促評斷帶領(lǐng)她迷路; 自豪感和偏見本質(zhì)上是故事她(和她真實的愛， Darcy)怎樣克服他們自己的個人failings—to發(fā)現(xiàn)浪漫幸福的所有obstacles—including。 伊麗莎白必須不僅應(yīng)付一個絕望的母親，一個遙遠(yuǎn)的父親，二非常表現(xiàn)的更加年輕的兄弟姐妹，并且?guī)孜粍堇瑢沟呐裕仨氁部朔﨑arcy她自己的錯誤印象，最初帶領(lǐng)她拒絕他的求婚。 而她駕駛家族和社會動亂，她魅力是充足保持他感興趣，幸運地。 當(dāng)她逐漸來認(rèn)可Darcy’s字符的貴族，她體會她對他的最初的偏見錯誤。
一、寫作
(一)存在問題
1.不會寫
所謂不會寫指的是，當(dāng)考試拿過一篇文章不知如何下手，不知如何提筆進(jìn)行寫作。筆者認(rèn)為主要是存在以下兩個原因：一是考生的確無話可說；二是心里雖然有話，但是拿捏不準(zhǔn)該寫哪句為妙。于是思前想后、猶豫不決，始終不敢提筆進(jìn)行寫作。
2.寫不好
所謂寫不好就是，拿過作文題，沒有明確的寫作思路，不按套路出牌；或是簡單漢語邏輯思維寫作，不符合英語寫作標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，近而沒有文采。原因在于：第一是平時沒有養(yǎng)成良好的寫作習(xí)慣；第二對于英語寫作的句式特點以及整體文章結(jié)構(gòu)框架不了解。
(二)解決辦法
第一，首先必須熟悉英語四級寫作具體要求。英語四級考試要求考生在30分鐘內(nèi)寫出120字的文章。體材主要有議論文(分為“Topic題型”和 A&B又稱“正反觀點題”)應(yīng)用文(主要是書信)、圖表文等。針對不同的體裁，寫作思路是不同的。比如，以議論文舉例來說：
1.議論文寫作思路
2.議論文分類：闡述主題型作文(Topic)；正反觀點型作文(A&B)
3.闡述主題型作文寫作：(這類題型作文要求從一句話或一個主題出發(fā)，按照提綱的要求進(jìn)行論述)
(1)基本寫作格式
5. 正反觀點型作文(A&B)(這類題型作文通常從正反兩方面來分別論述，最后得出你自己的結(jié)論。采用論點加論據(jù)寫作形式。)
(1)基本寫作格式
第二，熟悉英語寫作的幾個重要概念。
1.英語文章段落結(jié)構(gòu)特點
英語文章段落結(jié)構(gòu)一般有三部分構(gòu)成：主題句+擴展句+結(jié)尾句
(1)主題句：所謂主題句，就是英語文章段落的中心思想句。它是英語文章段落的靈魂，在英語文章段落中居于主導(dǎo)地位。我們都知道英語文章一般喜歡開門見山，所以主題句一般位于英語文章段落的句首。其他句子都要圍繞它而展開。
(2)擴展句：所謂擴展句就是為主題句起解釋說明或論證的句子。通常我們寫擴展句所采用的方法是舉例子(for example, for instance, such as, a case in point is that---)、列數(shù)據(jù)(according to the recent study/survey,---)等。
(3)結(jié)尾句：所謂結(jié)尾句就是總結(jié)句。英語寫作也類似于漢語寫作，最后再把自己本段落的寫作目的陳述一下。但是在英語寫作中結(jié)尾句畢竟還是少數(shù)。
因此我們通常看到英語的文章段落結(jié)構(gòu) 60%-70%都是由主題句+擴展句構(gòu)成。
2.主旨句
作為主旨句就是英語文章的中心思想句。英語文章一般首先用一句話概括一下作者的寫作目的或意圖，我們就把這句話稱之為主旨句。沒有受過寫作訓(xùn)練的考生是不會寫主旨句的。因此這樣的文章就不能夠稱之為好的英語文章，自然也得不到閱卷人的青睞了。
第三，學(xué)會遣詞造句
1.遣詞：
(1)詞匯等級
所謂詞匯的等級就是，我們在寫作的過程中，如果想出一個基本詞匯來之后，能夠在這個基本詞匯的基礎(chǔ)上把它在提升一下，也就是我們一般寫作所提倡的用“難詞 ”。比如，我們一提到“重要的”，大多數(shù)同學(xué)首先會想到“important”這個單詞，那么提升一下的話就可以想到它的如下同義詞：significant, vital, main, basilica, crucial, momentous etc
(2)詞匯準(zhǔn)確性
所謂詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性是指，我們在有一個詞近而想到它的同義詞之后，要結(jié)合語境選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)挠迷~。在這里必須指明的是，并不是詞匯等級越高越好，必須還要考慮到適合于不同的語境。比如，眼睛大，這個“大的”形容詞，我們首先會想到big,近而想到great, large, huge, vast, titanic, enormous etc。那么是不是用后面的詞就可以了呢？或者說用上enormous等詞更能博得閱卷人的好感呢？答案是否定的。在這里很明顯用后面的詞來修飾眼睛是不可以，只能用big，因為我們聽過一首英文歌曲叫做“I am a big big girl, in a big big world.”big表示眼睛大而迷人可愛的。
2.造句：
(1)詞組
很多考生平時寫作不太擅長用詞組，對于他們而言最習(xí)慣的就是想到漢語，然后對應(yīng)漢語思維寫出英語句子，這種寫作只能是單詞的羅列組合，談不上什么技巧文采可言，因此，寫出來的文章必然就是所謂平淡如流水，沒有英語的味道。如果我們能夠在單詞的基礎(chǔ)上，進(jìn)一步想到與之同義的詞組，那么文章就會顯得與眾不同，更具有英語的味道。比如上面所說的“重要的”這個單詞，當(dāng)我們想到important的時候，如果從語法角度再稍加考慮一下，我們會想到“be of importance”。因為，語法中規(guī)定：形容詞等于of加這個形容詞的名詞形式。如果再提升一步，我們還學(xué)過一個常用的詞組叫做“play an important role in---”。很多同學(xué)說自己的文章湊不夠字?jǐn)?shù)或是沒有文采，那么采用詞組進(jìn)行寫作是不是就可以解決以上問題了呢？
(2)句式
除了采用詞組，要使文章更具英語的味道，我們還需要變換句式。沒有受過正規(guī)作文訓(xùn)練的考生，通常采用的句式多為主謂賓、主系表。于是我們看到大多數(shù)的文章充斥著這樣的形式：I am a good boy, and I am a student. I study in Shandong University, and I have three years experience in Qilu Hotel.這樣流水帳式的文章顯然不能得到高分。
寫作中閱卷人喜歡的句式有以下兩種：一是插入語；二是倒裝。
第一，插入語。
所謂插入語，英語中有兩種形式。一種是有兩個逗號之間引起的成分稱之為插入語；第二種是有兩個半破折號引起的成分稱之為插入語。如下所示(黑體劃線處)：
Jinan, the Spring City, is a famous tourist city.
Other people may give us instrumental support—financial aid, material resources, and needed services—that reduces stress by helping us resolve and cope with our problems.
插入語的作用主要有兩個，一個是突出主語，比如說：He, who would like to play basketball, is a good student.
第二個作用是解釋說明，比如說：People, especially students, should work hard.
第二，倒裝
倒裝是我們寫作中需要用到的。雖然略顯俗套，但是卻是很能滿足閱卷人的主觀感受的。常用的倒裝形式有以下幾種：
Only + 時間狀語
Only when all of us join in the efforts of eliminating cheating at all levels can we expect to have a cleaner society and a more beautiful future.
Only + 介詞詞組
Only by planning his time care fully can he improve efficiency and make achievements.
Only in this way can we master the writing skills step by steps.
否定詞位于句首(hardly when; never; not only---,but also---; seldom)
在我一生當(dāng)中很難遇到這樣的人
Seldom in my life have I met such a kind-hearted man.
地點方位名詞位于句首
In no other place in the world can one find such enthusiasm for applying for hosting the 2008 Olympic Games.
(3)修辭
無論是漢語寫作還是英語寫作，修辭其實非常的重要。它是作者寫作功底具體事例地展現(xiàn)。所謂修辭包括比喻、擬人、排比等等。英語寫作中的修辭問題我已經(jīng)專門寫過一篇文章(見《英語寫作幾種修辭手法》)。這里僅舉一個比喻例子，還是拿“重要的”來舉例。當(dāng)你用完詞組之后，如果你用上下面比如句子，則文章就會顯得神采飛揚，試比較：
The bicycle is important for us.
The bicycle is of importance for us.
The bicycle plays an important role in our life.
The bicycle, environmental friendliness vehicle, plays an important role in our life.
The bicycle is like the air, water, and sunshine and cannot be parted with a moment in our life.
那么很明顯，最后一個句子是我們最終拿到考場上去搏擊高分的句子。
第四，平時要注意積累
很多考生為了寫好作文也作了好多工作，課下也付出了很多，包括背誦大量的文章等等，但是提筆寫作時候，仍不見的有所改觀。問題在哪里呢？
我認(rèn)為，很多考生雖然也背誦文章，但卻只是死記硬背。如果合上書本讓他復(fù)述，他們就會卡殼。就是茶壺里煮餃子，倒不出來。我們說背誦是個輸入的過程，而說和寫則是輸出的過程。我們真正需要的是把平時積累的隨時隨地用在我們的寫作中。因此，我們在注重積累的同時，一定在平時練習(xí)的時候，把他們多家運用。只有多練多用，才能真正達(dá)到學(xué)以致用，才能真正提高寫作水平。(濟(jì)南新東方學(xué)校 趙曉棟)
特別說明：由于各方面情況的不斷調(diào)整與變化，搜學(xué)網(wǎng)所提供的考試信息僅供參考，敬請考生以權(quán)威部門公布的正式信息為準(zhǔn)。
寫作是語言應(yīng)用的一個重要方面，也是語言能力測定的重要手段，衡量寫作水平的 標(biāo)準(zhǔn)便是看其是否能用學(xué)過的語言材料，語法知識等用文字的形式來表達(dá)描述。 書面語言表達(dá)一般分為三個過程：思維、組織、表達(dá)。先是思維，把要寫的東西在腦中 思考，這往往是個別的，孤立的一些素材，很凌亂瑣碎；因此要對此進(jìn)行組織，把這些思維 作出整理，使其條理、系統(tǒng)化，但這還是較粗糙的，可能還有一些用詞不當(dāng)或語言錯誤；最 后才是表達(dá)，把組織過的材料仔細(xì)推敲，確無問題了再落筆成文。在撰寫時要注意主謂語一 致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等，這就是寫作。上述的三個過程，最難的就是第三個過程，這需 要我們有較好的語法知識，掌握一定數(shù)量的句型，習(xí)慣用語，熟練的寫作技巧，這樣才能寫 出通順生動的文章來。 總之，要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧。 那么，究竟怎樣才能寫好作文呢？ 閱讀優(yōu)秀范文 首先要搞好閱讀。閱讀是寫作的基礎(chǔ)，在閱讀方面下的功夫越深，駕馭語言的能力也就 越強。所以要寫好英語先要讀好英語，在語言學(xué)習(xí)方面狠下苦功，教科書要讀透，因為教科 書中的文章都是一些很好的范文，文筆流暢，語言規(guī)范，精彩的一些課文段落要背誦。再就 是要進(jìn)行大量課外閱讀，并記住一些好文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。 加強練詞造句訓(xùn)練 其次，要加強練詞造句的訓(xùn)練。詞句對作文相當(dāng)于造房的材料，無好材料就造不出好房 子。平時在學(xué)習(xí)閱讀時要注意收集積累，把好的詞語、短語、句型做好筆記。平時在練習(xí)中 的錯誤也要做好記錄，再對照正確句子，使地道的英語句子如同條件反射，落筆就對。 了解英語寫作格式 還有，要了解英語寫作的不同體裁與格式。可以先看一本介紹英 語寫作入門的書，對英語寫作有一個初步的概念，如怎么寫議論文，如何提出論據(jù)，如何展 開，如何確定中心句；又如，英語信的格式，如何根據(jù)不同身份寫不同結(jié)束語等，然后根據(jù) 不同的體裁進(jìn)行寫作練習(xí)。 用英語寫日記 要養(yǎng)成記英語日記勤練筆的好習(xí)慣。經(jīng)常用英語記日記，等于天天在練筆，這無疑是提 高英語協(xié)作的行之有效的好辦法。在記日記時，不要總是用簡單句，要有意識地用一些好的 詞組、句型、關(guān)聯(lián)詞和復(fù)合句等，使文句更優(yōu)美生動。還有要按照題目或所給情景寫文章練 筆。寫好后對照范文，找出差距，然后再練習(xí)，這對提高英語作文也很有幫助，在游泳中學(xué) 會游泳，只有多練習(xí)才能練好。 總之，平時學(xué)習(xí)語言素材積累多了，體裁格式記住了又經(jīng)常練習(xí)不斷提高，到作文下筆 時就會得心應(yīng)手，水到渠成。
標(biāo)準(zhǔn)便是看其是否能用學(xué)過的語言材料，語法知識等用文字的形式來表達(dá)描述。 書面語言表達(dá)一般分為三個過程：思維、組織、表達(dá)。先是思維，把要寫的東西在腦中 思考，這往往是個別的，孤立的一些素材，很凌亂瑣碎；因此要對此進(jìn)行組織，把這些思維 作出整理，使其條理、系統(tǒng)化，但這還是較粗糙的，可能還有一些用詞不當(dāng)或語言錯誤；最 后才是表達(dá)，把組織過的材料仔細(xì)推敲，確無問題了再落筆成文。在撰寫時要注意主謂語一 致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等，這就是寫作。上述的三個過程，最難的就是第三個過程，這需 要我們有較好的語法知識，掌握一定數(shù)量的句型，習(xí)慣用語，熟練的寫作技巧，這樣才能寫 出通順生動的文章來。 總之，要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧。 那么，究竟怎樣才能寫好作文呢？ 閱讀優(yōu)秀范文 首先要搞好閱讀。閱讀是寫作的基礎(chǔ)，在閱讀方面下的功夫越深，駕馭語言的能力也就 越強。所以要寫好英語先要讀好英語，在語言學(xué)習(xí)方面狠下苦功，教科書要讀透，因為教科 書中的文章都是一些很好的范文，文筆流暢，語言規(guī)范，精彩的一些課文段落要背誦。再就 是要進(jìn)行大量課外閱讀，并記住一些好文章的篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。 加強練詞造句訓(xùn)練 其次，要加強練詞造句的訓(xùn)練。詞句對作文相當(dāng)于造房的材料，無好材料就造不出好房 子。平時在學(xué)習(xí)閱讀時要注意收集積累，把好的詞語、短語、句型做好筆記。平時在練習(xí)中 的錯誤也要做好記錄，再對照正確句子， 了解英語寫作格式 還有，要了解英語寫作的不同體裁與格式。可以先看一本介紹英 語寫作入門的書，對英語寫作有一個初步的概念，如怎么寫議論文，如何提出論據(jù)，如何展 開，如何確定中心句；又如，英語信的格式，如何根據(jù)不同身份寫不同結(jié)束語等，然后根據(jù) 不同的體裁進(jìn)行寫作練習(xí)。 用英語寫日記 要養(yǎng)成記英語日記勤練筆的好習(xí)慣。經(jīng)常用英語記日記，等于天天在練筆，這無疑是提 高英語協(xié)作的行之有效的好辦法。在記日記時，不要總是用簡單句，要有意識地用一些好的 詞組、句型、關(guān)聯(lián)詞和復(fù)合句等，使文句更優(yōu)美生動。還有要按照題目或所給情景寫文章練 筆。寫好后對照范文，找出差距，然后再練習(xí)，這對提高英語作文也很有幫助，在游泳中學(xué) 會游泳，只有多練習(xí)才能練好。 總之，平時學(xué)習(xí)語言素材積累多了，體裁格式記住了又經(jīng)常練習(xí)不斷提高，到作文下筆 時就會得心應(yīng)手，水到渠成。
老師教我們的：先一句一句的寫，在用關(guān)聯(lián)詞連起來。
MY favorite subject
my favorite subject is English. We can learn many grammars and words through it and we also can know foreigners' culture.In English class,we listen to teacher and answer the questions to improve our english.
why do I like it?well,as you can see,I can learn a lot from it and It is very interesting for me to read english book,listen english songs.not just I like it but my teacher encourage me to speak english.
do you like english?I will give you some advice .The first ,you should listen to your teacher carefully and take notes.Then,you could chat with your friends in english ,you can learn from each other.The important is you must love it ,because interest is the best teacher.
I love english,and I believe that:don't be shy,just have a try!
我用了一些很實用的結(jié)構(gòu)和單詞，希望對你有幫助！
初二文化水平英語作文,求高手幫忙寫一篇附翻譯60詞50懸賞
my dream job I have a dream.我有一個夢想 When i was young,i want to be a journalist. 當(dāng)我很小的時候我就想當(dāng)一名記者 Everytime when meeting with beatiful words and fascinating senery on the newspapers and magizines ,i have the impluse to do the same thing those ...
求各位高手,幫忙寫以下幾篇英語小作文,急用。謝謝!
to walk with people like dogs do. A cage and a wheel is enough for them to play. They need fresh water everyday to keep themselves from diseases. I think some day I will buy a hamster and take care of it. I love it so much.只給你寫兩篇.英文作文要自己寫才能寫好....
why do you study?一個一百詞左右的英語作文,請高手幫幫忙啦。
Studying hard can make us get a lot of knowledge and we can use what we learn to help to build our country. Studying can provide us with many opportunities .That is to say ,as long as we study hard and get some knowledge ,we can do what we want to do. For example ,w...
麻煩高手幫忙寫一篇日語作文,“我的愛好” 或者是“工作的一天” 之類...
我的興趣愛好廣泛，其中最特別的是對動畫的喜愛。盡管我已經(jīng)長大成人，對動畫依然有著特別的情感。尤其是《圣闘士星矢》，這部作品不僅適合孩子觀看，也適合成年人觀看，它給予人們激勵與感動，以及團(tuán)結(jié)到最后一刻永不放棄的精神，這些都一直激勵著我。除此之外，我也喜歡旅行。雖然目前還沒有去過很多地方...
語文高手幫忙:幫我找一找 作文:我的愿望
為了實現(xiàn)這個我從小就盼望已久的愿望，我從小學(xué)二年級便開始跟隨楊老師學(xué)寫毛筆字。當(dāng)時，我只能利用課余時間和假期學(xué)習(xí)書法，大部分的時間都用在學(xué)習(xí)文化知識上。記得當(dāng)時有些同學(xué)笑我傻，說什么毛筆字已經(jīng)過時了，學(xué)書法只能浪費時間。我沒有被他們的冷言冷語所擊垮，相反，我對書法的愛好反而更加強烈。
...要我寫個作文是(わたしの每日) 大概大概要怎樣寫丫.幫忙幫忙...
下午時光，我通常會參加興趣小組，比如書法或繪畫，這些活動讓我感到放松。晚上六點，我回家享用晚餐，晚飯后，我會沖涼，然后在九點之前上床準(zhǔn)備休息。這個作文題目要求我詳細(xì)記錄日常生活，練習(xí)使用動詞。比如，“起床”、“洗臉”、“吃早飯”、“上課”、“下課”、“吃午飯”、“寫作業(yè)”等，這些都...
...篇日語作文,我的一天,我的朋友,暑假。請高手幫忙,200字左右初級水平...
午後、一時から二時まで、晝休みをします。三時から六時まで、學(xué)校へ授業(yè)にいきます。夜はいつも晩御飯を食べて三十分ぐらい、ニュースを見ます。それから一時間ぐらい日本語を勉強します。毎日ほとんど同じです。私の夏休み 今年の夏休みはずいぶん長かったです。高校の卒業(yè)ピクニ...
中學(xué)生習(xí)作評語 求高手幫忙寫150字左右的
你的習(xí)作一貫寫得很好，語言優(yōu)美，語句流暢，讓我也仿佛加入了你們的比賽中，看著你的作文，我也感受到了許多，學(xué)習(xí)到了寫作的方法，因此謝謝你。你的語言幽默生動，讓我愿意繼續(xù)讀下去，跟著你的思路走。文章的好詞佳句可真不少呢，讓我如起來感到親切形象，親愛的，下次的作文也讓我看看好嗎，你的...
女朋友叫我寫作文
you can give your parents photos to them and remind them of the good time they have spent.I think if you follow the advice which I have given you .You will slove the problem soon after。2. 女朋友叫我寫日記請高手幫忙寫 今天，莪要寫日記了。呵呵，很久沒拿筆的莪，現(xiàn)在拿起...
需要一篇“有志者事竟成”作文的開頭和結(jié)尾,請語文高手幫忙,謝謝!
…古人有志的事就更多了：司馬光從小就想彌補記憶不如人的缺陷，于是放棄玩的時間，勤奮讀書，終于能使他精讀背誦的內(nèi)容，終身不忘；蒲松齡先生為激發(fā)自己奮發(fā)有為，寫下一副對聯(lián)：“有志者，事竟成，破釜沉舟，百二秦關(guān)終屬楚；苦心人，天不負(fù)，臥薪嘗膽，三千越甲可吞吳”……其實，發(fā)生在我們...
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