英語作文求修改 Should University Students Go in for Busi？ 大學(xué)英語作文求修改。謝謝，最好擴(kuò)寫幾句，因?yàn)樽謹(jǐn)?shù)不太夠。
修改如下：1. 第一段第一行：choose應(yīng)該改成have chosen（用in recent years時(shí)，主句要用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)）。 2. 第二段第二行：is the place …宜改成：is where to cultivate the all-round development of students. 這樣，句子顯得更高檔些。3. 第二段第三行：Going…改成：Second, going …（你提到三點(diǎn)優(yōu)勢(shì)，故加上“第二”）。最后一段：both arguments中間宜加上their，這樣意思就更明確了。另外，我的建議：你的短文中過多地使用了動(dòng)名詞作主語，不妨改成不定式作主語，用it作形式主語，這樣就避免了啰嗦。如：…，recognizing weaknesses in practice is significant可以改成：…, it is significant to recognize weaknesses in practice。
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